Overall I thought our presentation was a success. We were able to present our art proposal to the entire class. The presentation consisted of what the idea was, "Butler Bubbles", the reason behind why we choose this idea, and what was the logic behind choosing Holcomb Gardens. I thought our speech was organized well and each person did their part to contribute to the speech. Not one person said everything, everyone contributed equally. I think we did a good job with presenting our topic and giving all the important details. We figured in how Holcomb Gardens was the appropriate area for our idea. However, for next time I think we need to be a little more persuasive. We need to really push them and put more effort into selling them into our idea. We did a good job of how this product could relate to any audience, boys or girls, but we just need to use more persuasive vocabulary in our speech.
All the groups did a fantastic job with their art proposals. The visual aids were impressive. Some of those 3-D models were really good. The visual aid along with what they were saying really tied everything together. One could not exist without the other.
The one group that sold me was the "Watering Hole". I really like how they incorporated cost into their speech. The idea that the water supply was going to be coming from the sewers and that the university wasn't going to have to pay for water was really interesting. They did their research and the more knowledge they had about their topic the more I was convinced. I think if our group talked about cost and other economic factors it would have been more persuasive because cost is a big deal. The less expensive you can make it the more people are going to be willing to support your product.
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